True Mother Hen every ROSE has it's thorn
Number of posts : 224 Age : 31 Location : Falling for the one I loved and lost, on these broken wings... Registration date : 2009-02-06
| Subject: Alone Once More: by Rose Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:52 pm | |
| Explination: A poem I wrote from Bella's piont of view, set During New Moon. It describes how she felt after Edward left her.
~~~ Alone Once More
I cried out for you the day you left. You could never understand how I felt then. I shed many, bitter tears for you.
That day I awoke to find you missing My mind filled with an overwhelming sorrow, a numbness that took me over.
I found it so hard to breathe my dear You took everything away, emptiness inside. That was all that remained of my heart.
It was a pain I could never feel completely And yet it would not fade away. A wound so deep it was untouchable.
My soul longed for you, as it still does. you could never be replaced in my mind yet I know you will never return.
Now you know how depressed I feel. I was a cracked mirror, just waiting to break. it was hard to hold the pieces together.
So now I am dying on the inside now that my heart has shut down forever now that you have abandoned me.
Now im Alone.....Once More. ~~~
Hope you liked it! please Review/comment! xx | |
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everybody is fooled. I'm sleepwalking back into this...
Number of posts : 1160 Age : 27 Location : forever lost in a pit of misary Registration date : 2009-02-06
| Subject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:37 pm | |
| -tears up- Oh wow. Did you mean to make me want to cry?! THAT WAS GREAT. | |
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True Mother Hen every ROSE has it's thorn
Number of posts : 224 Age : 31 Location : Falling for the one I loved and lost, on these broken wings... Registration date : 2009-02-06
| Subject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose Wed Feb 18, 2009 2:54 pm | |
| *huggles* aww Moodzies-kins! no I didnt mean to make you cry! But im glad you liked it! I just think thats how Bella felt... | |
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everybody is fooled. I'm sleepwalking back into this...
Number of posts : 1160 Age : 27 Location : forever lost in a pit of misary Registration date : 2009-02-06
| Subject: Re: Alone Once More: by Rose Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:43 pm | |
| -tear- It. is. wonderful. -tear- | |
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